Saturday, November 15, 2008

SURPRISE FOR MY SWEETY !!!!!!!!!!

To all the novice lovers,
who don't know how to please their love,
take a minute off your busy life,
and read this little excerpt.

As the weekend approached ,
and the health of my poor fiance deteriorated,
living far away in a different city,
to make him smile was all I contemplated.

My eyes yearned to see my baby,
he was suffering from pain and cold,
all I wanted was to make him get well,
to see him jumping around as before.

So I booked , Oh my God! so costly tickets,
emptying my pocket for good,
told him , I am sending you a huge gift,
so be there at the airport for sure!

He questioned and queried,
he didn't want a gift so huge,
how could I reveal to him,
it was me coming for his refuge!

At last the destined day arrived,
my friends, thanks for keeping the secret,
for the day I landed in Kolkata,
My baby was spellbound and his suffering faded!

4 comments:

Padma said...

This is very sweet yaar..

Unknown said...

Why did you go back..?

As she left with roses in her bag
How I wish she could stay back
The last look, the last glimpse
I controlled the shout on my lipse

Wanted to yell to stop her there
Only if she knows how much I care
As I waved to bid her Bye
A chill, suddenly ran by

Through the phone I could hear
The captains announcement loud and clear
I understood that it is the time
For her to hang up the phone line

The pain of separation bit me badly
But I cant show emotions
As I must behave
like a Man; so sadly

I came back to my room
I felt as if I was aloof
She was flying far away
A tear rolled down , not s Mans' way

I waited for her call, read no mail
Though it was office, felt like jail
Wanted to hear my Sweethearts voice
But hd to wait as I had no choice

The phone rang for a fraction
My body sprand into action
I could see the number flashing
I felt so relieved and so allay

She spoke and the smile came back
Oh my love.. why did you go back..?

Unknown said...

Wow .. this one is really good sweet and I liked Anupam's comment too ..

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